Puddles of Love

o.O wao! This is really really good! But everyone has their flaws..Like me...wait... I have more flaws than anyone! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/g/g…" width="17" height="15" alt="" title="Giggle"/>

VISION - I don't know wat this is LOL I'm too stoopid.

Originality - Don't worry! I know what originality is! LOL.. Yeah! I think it's original, but to be honest, I think the ground should be a lot more grassy! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>

Technique - Okay, To be honest, I think the umbrella should spread out, and look at the feet...Does she have two left/right feet?, I think the eyes should be a bit bigger, I think the rain and puddle is great!


Okay?

I will break down Shading and Burning..
Shading - There is 3 types of shading,
1. PILLOW SHADING
2. NEON SHADING


Pillow Shading - means you only put shadows in corner
Neon Shading - When you shade properly, but you can hardly see the color (I do this a lot with my artwork HAHA)

I think you did great with shading! So I give it 4/5

Burning -
Burning is really fun and makes the color lighter, but do not over use it! If you over use it, it wouldn't look appealing <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/>

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Anyway, I hope I didn't sound too cruel, And in the end I think this is great! 7 and a half out of ten! Awesome! Maybe you check my gallery and critique me? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Aww"/> I think you've done a great job, and I can see you took time with it! Great job =Neon-Fizz~~

Love, ~100millionme